I have a social science teacher. Her full name is Reni Indrias Kuntari, but we usually call her Mrs. Reni. She is about fourty six years old. She lives at 62 North Plandi Jombang.
Mrs. Reni is tall and thin. She is also beautiful. She has long, straight and black hair. She also has a sharp nose. Mrs. Reni has bright skin. Her eyes wide and black. She always fashionable. Mrs. Reni has beautiful hair and beautiful face are like Mrs. Evita.
Mrs. Reni is a nice teacher. She master of social science subjects. She also very patient and friendly. She always helps the students when we are difficulties, she tought us untill we understand the material. She guided her students to acquire national achievements in the field of social science was achieved by Alifan.
Mrs. Reni is a funny and sociable teacher. Teaching-learning process is relaxed but serious. Mrs. Reni did to deserve a favorite teacher, so that at the time of day the teacher arrived her obtained her first champion in Junior High School Negeri 2 Jombang.
Mrs. Reni is really a good teacher.
Good Job, Ines, but you should edit some parts of it:
BalasHapus1. Her eyes wide: Her eyes are wide
2. Delete (hilangkan) the word 'are' in line 7
3. She master...(line 7): She is the master of social science.
4. are (line 9): have
5. tought (line 10: teaches
6. guided (line 10): guides
7. was achieved (line 11): like what was achieved
8. The last sentence: Mrs. Reny deserves to be the favorite teacher at Junior High School 2 Jombang.
okay thank you very much
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